Welcoming STORM that went wrong

Storm finally woke up but was still to sick to eat
occ:u still havent joined

Thundering hoofbeats, the rhythmic pounding against hard earth. A flash of white and a blur of legs. A tall, bulky equine kept a steady three beats as he cantered throughout the rolling hills covered in lush, delicate grass.
His nostrils flared as he took in the surrounding scents, the faint smell of other stallions wafting about. He kicked out his hind legs in a slight buck, wrenching forward into a full gallop as he caught a new, stronger scent trail. His pearly mane and tail bannered out behind him, forelock slipping from between his ears to flow out with his mane. The absense of the tuft of hair displayed a bright, crimson star above hard, golden-brown eyes.
Skidding to a halt at the peak of one of the hills, he locked his glare on a group of fellow horses beneath him. He reared, churning the air with his maroon fore-legs, then came down hard on the ground again. A wild bellow escaped his maw as he called out to the hooved beasts, snorting and pawing up dirt.
"Which of you is the lead stallion of your little get-together?" he roared, lowering his head and lashing his tail out behind him.

occ:broken gave me permission to claim part of these lands.

(yeah so?)

occ:so you cant make my stallion leave or try to claim his land
Storm nickered to the mare "did you hear somthing or was it in my head"

The graceful mare, taller the other mare, yes, shorter than the stallions, watched from the hills.

Sorm who stood up and walked to get a drink from the cool pond.
Hmm i guess its just whispers in the wind"

Aia snorted and trotted down the other side of the mountain, out of sight.

Maple walked into the meadow cautiously.She looked around at the beautiful place.Maple went into a prance with her tail high.

Storm nuzzled his mate and let out a whinnie

Maple saw heard a winnie and winnied back.Then she saw who the winnie came from.She stopped square in her tracks.Maple never realized a stallion owned this territory.Then something caught her eye.The stream.

Summer lifted her head, and her blood went ice-cold. There was horses nearly everywhere. She stood up to her feet and glared at the ivory stallion. "Leave us be, you can't claim this land."

Anger welled up in storm he was about to break and attack now!
His dager pawed the ground just waiting for a reason to strike

Maple saw the stallion was mad.She walked a ways away from him.

spirit saw the mare"i would never hearyou fae(young mare) Im angery at the stallion "he called

Maple bobbed her head and nickered softly"Could I join your herd?"

"Yes all are aloud to join my herd other then stallions released geldings are even welcome"he smiled

Maple smiled "Thank You".Then she started to graze.