Welcoming STORM that went wrong

Storm galloped apon thse open lands.His pattern dancing among his pelt.His pillars carried him high his daggers sruck the sofly coated earth.He slid to a sudden stop His nares flard for a scent of others.None to be close around he reared up then slammd down his daggers stricking the earth to the sound almost of thunder.He lt out a scream calling"This is my land forsaken or not this is my home"he struck the earth one last time with his fron right dager pawing at it marking his home

Pelt-fer
Pillars-lgs
daggers-hooves
nares-nosstrials

Summer let out a whinny. "Your home?" She echoed. "But this has belonged to my family for a long time!" She seemed to be panicing. "Well where else will I be able to live? It belongs to me now since all of my family has died."

"Yes this shall be my home and you are welcome here my lady"he said tryin to be polite his dagers grabed the earth's crust with every step he took

Summer nodded gratefully. "Thank you---what did you say your name was? Mine is Summer." Although she was slightly nervous around the stallion, he seemed nice.

" i am storm"he said sweetly looking at the flawless mare

"That's a great name," Summer said to the handsome stallion. "So does this mean I'm in your herd?"

"well i hope so my dear" he said with a smile as his dagers grabed the earth as he looked into her lovly eyes

Summer smiled back at the stallion. "So what brings you here?"

"I am a lone stallion i have no familyor mate so i came here in surch of one"he smerked

"Me too," Summer said, nodding. She opened her mouth to say something but she shut it.

"What were you going to say my dear"Strom said lifting his head

Summer looked around, seeming nervous suddenly. "Well, I was going to ask you . . . " she trailed off. "If you like the area." What ridiculous thing did I babble now? she thought to herself. If he liked the area? Who says that?

"Yes the area is wondrfull.......Ummm i wanted to know if you would honor m with being my Lover(mate)"Storm paused and lowered his head

Summer smiled, and nodded. "I would love to be your mate."

Shayton Trotted Up To Them "plaease leave my land" He Said Very Politly

"I'm sorry," Summer said, sounding just as polite. "But I think you must have mistaken."

"This is my land "he said steping infront of the mare"AND TRY TO TAKE IT FROM ME AND YOU WILL END UP DAD"HE SAID WITH A SMERK

occ:sorry 4 caps

ooc: It's okay lol

bic: Summer flattened her ears and took a step back. "We should go now..." she said, hoping a fight wouldn't start.

"Im staying this is my home"he said then squinting his eyes and turning to nip the mar playfully
occ:your his mate right

ooc: Yep.

bic: Summer took a step to line herself to him and returned the playful nip. "Alright," she said, agreeing to stay. "But what are we going to do about this?"

Il fight of anlyone that try's to take our home"he said then smiled at the mare

Summer smiled then nuzzled Storm. "I know you can win," she said, nodding confidentially.

Storm chuckled well its becoming late We should rest now "he said as h walked up bside her

"Good idea," Summer said, and after glancing once behind her to see if Shayton had dared to strike, she looked around. "Do you know any good resting areas?"

Follow me"Storm alloped to a area syrounded by trease with tall lush grass as bedding"here my love"he siad with a smile