Warrior Cats

I've made this roleplay before, but it was a failure. So let me try again. This time with more rules.

RULES...

You are a warrior cat. Not kitty-pets [house pets], strays, or loners.
No using any names from the book.
Your name has to be similar to these:
- Leafnose
- Petalbreath
- Tigerstripe
ONLY leaders can have their name ending in "Star" such as...
- Birdstar
- Puddlestar
- Longstar
ONLY apprentices can have their name ending in "Paw" such as...
- Smallpaw
- Blackpaw
- Wolfpaw
ONLY kits can have their name ending in "Kit" such as...
- Robinkit
- Graykit
- Mudkit

Do not have names such as...

Fartpaw, Angelpaw, Demonstar, Pooppaw, Yellowpee, or anything inappropriate.

Most first names are used to describe your cat.

For a mellow cat - Rain, Mist, Leaf, Puddle, Robin, Bird, Small, or Silent
For a fiesty cat - Fire, Red, Dark, Shade, or Black

Consult me before you make your cats name, just in a simple message in this forum.

Good examples: Is Tinystep okay?

Bad examples: Is Dumbpaw okay?

RANKS...

Leader - Only 1 leader. CAN NOT HAVE MATE! But if you wish to break the warrior code to make it interesting, they have to keep it hidden, and have it approved by ALL roleplayers first.
Deputy - Only 1 deputy. This position can not be begged for or asked for. The leader must choose so without human influence.
Medicine Cat - Only 1, sometimes having an apprentice when older. CAN NOT HAVE MATE! But if you wish to break the warrior code to make it interesting, they have to keep it hidden, and have it approved by ALL roleplayers first.
Warrior - Many warriors. They fight, protect, hunt, and serve for the Clan.
Apprentice - They are assigned a mentor, usually a warrior, deputy, or sometimes leader, and they are trained into being a warrior. Their usual jobs are to clean the elder's bedding, or when bad, pick ticks off elders.
Mothers - They stay in the nursery where they care for their or others' kits.
Elders - Older warriors who have retired.

CLANS...

ThunderClan - Brave, curious, and strong.
RiverClan - Intelligent, noble, and commited.
WindClan - Worrysome, peaceful, but great fighters.
ShadowClan - Dark, sly, and very strong.

We are going to play ThunderClan.

BAD EXAMPLES OF ROLEPLAY...

Bluestar yowled for Firestar.
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Firestar ran to the RiverClan border. What is it Bluestar?
- - - - - - - - - -
Bluestar yowled, "Nothing, I was just wondering if we can be mates."

That was how my last roleplay went.

Why it was bad roleplay...

1. They were in different Clans. Leaders would NEVER stop to "chat" and ask for mates.
2. The roleplayers stole not only one, but two names from the original warrior books.

FORMS...

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Rank:
Personality:
Extra:
Picture:

MY FORM...

Name: Hawkhead
Age: 4 years old
Gender: Female
Rank: Warrior
Personality: Hawkhead is fiesty at times, but at heart she is forgiving, loving, and peaceful.
Extra: Her sister, Puddlefoot, is from WindClan.
Picture:

Name: Graystar
Age: 16 years old
Gender: Male
Rank: Leader
Personality: Rough around the edges, Graystar can be harsh. He is on his last life. [Leaders have 9 lives]
Extra: His mate, Rainwhisker, died during birthing and his kit, Blackkit, died soon after birth.
Picture:

HOW IS OUR CLAN DOING?

Leader - Graystar [Tom]
Deputy - Brightleaf [She-cat]
Medicine cat - Blackwhisker [Tom]
Warriors - Hawkhead [She-cat]
Apprentices - Robinpaw [She-cat]
Mothers -
Kits -
Elders -

Name: Brightleaf
Age: 24 moons ((2 years))
Gender: Female
Rank: Deputy ((If Thats Okay))
Personality: Sweet,Noble,Loyal,Coragous,Brave,Honoured,
Extra:
Picture:


Name: RobinPaw
Age: 6 moons
Gender: Female
Rank: Queen To be
Personality: Youlle See
Extra:
Picture:


Name: Blackwhisker
Age: 12 moons ((1 year))
Gender: Male
Rank: Medisine Cat
Personality: You Will See
Extra: He Is In Love But Is Not Aloud To mate
Picture:


((Sorry i Had Already Posted When Before I Read To Ask About Names But Are These Names Okay))


((Only FemaLe Leaders And Medicene Cats Are Not Aloud To Have Mates Males Can))

((They are all okay, and I forgot about that, thanks.))

((Graystar will announce Brightleaf to being a deputy.))

Graystar padded up to the highrock and with a single bound, he landed awkwardly on his paws, but managed to smoothly walk to the edge. "All cats old enough to catch prey for themselves gther under the highrock for a Clan meeting!" he yowled, his voice becoming raspy from his older age.

Hawkhead's ears pricked up from inside the warriors' den, where she had been eating a magpie. Leaving the bird partially finished in the den, she stood up and walked over to the highrock, sitting down carefully on her haunches.

Black Whisker And Brightleaf Came To The Highrock as well as RobinPaw

Brightleaf Hoped She Would Become Deputy

(9When Can Brightleaf Become Leader And Can She After He dies in battle))

"Um Graystar sorry to interrupt but i do hnot have a mentor yet"Robinpaw Siad

Graystar nodded to Robinpaw. "I understand," he said, and then raised his voice again. "Since a deputy has to have mentored one apprentice before hand, Robinpaw, your mentor will be Brightleaf." He turned to the she-cat. "Brightleaf. Do you understand what this means? You will be the next deputy of ThunderClan. Do you accept this great task?"

"It Would Be My Honour To Mentor A Kit Like Robinpaw And I Accept This Task Of Becoming Deputy"Brightleaf said and went up to GRaystar and licked his shoulder



((12 Moons Later It Is Time For Robinpaws Warrior Ceramony))

((How About Graystar retires instead of sying))

((Okay.))

Exactly 12 moons later, Graystar lept up to the familiar high rock. With a loud mew, he called out to his Clan the familiar lines of: "All cats old enough to catch their own food gather under the rock for a Clan meeting!" As he waited, they collected under him [[sorry for pp!]]. "As you know," he continued on, not bothering to dismiss the rumbles of confusement. "I am aging as time goes on, and I believe it is my time to retire." Graystar's eyes glinted across the crowd to see their reactions. Going on, he said, "And on another note, it is time for Robinpaw's warrior ceremony. Robinpaw, please step forward with your mentor, Brightleaf."

"Yes Graystar"Robinpaw said stepping forward

Brightleaf flowed


Blackwhisker Looked at him

Graystar bent his neck to touch noses with both Robinpaw, the brave apprentice, and Brightleaf, then smart mentor and loyal deputy. "Are you up to the tasks of being a loyal ThunderClan warrior?" he asked to Robinpaw. "And are you, Brightleaf, up to the tasks of being a loyal ThunderClan leader?"

Hawkhead padded over just in time to hear "Brightleaf" and "leader". Knowing it was an important meeting, she quickened her pace and sat down next to Blackwhisker.

[[What would you like Robinpaw's name to be?]]

((you pick leaders always pick))


"Yes I Am I Promiss To Obey the Warrior code and protect the clan with my life"Robinpaw said

"Graystar it is my honor to say yes and accpept the resonpsisbiltes of being a thunderclan leader just as my great grand father was"Brightleaf said

"Great," said Graystar to the both of them. "Robinpaw, as you are now a warrior," he paused for a second, forgetting the sacred words a leader always said. He pondered about it for a moment but then just decided to quickly make the rest up, "Your new name shall be Robinheart."

"Thankyou my great leader"Robinheart said "it will be my honor to be a warrior of the clan

Brightleaf looked around

Graystar nodded and rested his tailtip on Robinheart's shoulder. "Brightleaf, since you are to be the new leader, you need to choose a new deputy. You must travel to the Moonstone and receive your leader name. But that can wait until tomorrow, then you must choose a deputy by moonshine."

Hawkhead watched the new warrior and leader and seeing nobody else had started, she chanted the two she-cat's names.

"May I Choose A Deputy Now Graystar"

Grayshadow [old name] nodded and dipped his head to Brightleaf. "Yes," he said and lept off the highrock for the last time. He stretched his legs and sat down, curling his tail over his paws and watching intently.

"the warrior i thought would make a good deputy is..........................hawkhead do you accept the chalenagges of being deputy"Brightstar said

Name:SilentPaw
Age:2 years
Gender:Female
Rank:Apprentices
Personality:SilentPaw is quiet and shy, yet a great fighter.
Extra:None
Picture:
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My cat, don't use pic

"Silentpaw Go back to the Aprentice Den"Rainwhisker said

SilentPaw nodded in respect and padded back to the den.

"Silentpaw"Robinheart her mother whispered


((Please casn it be her mother

(no, but I don't want to RP in cat right now)

Hawkhead's eyes widened. "M-me? Yes, I do accept the tasks of being the new deputy." She dipped her head.